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The green or the red one ?

The green or the red one ?
Photo Information
Copyright: Pascal Jousse (Ballou) Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 78 W: 23 N: 83] (1036)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2005-04
Categories: Daily Life, Decisive Moment, Mood
Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Date Submitted: 2009-01-27 5:01
Viewed: 3286
Points: 25
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Il est encore tôt ce matin. La vendeuse installe minutieusement ses tongs, espérant que la journée sera bonne.
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Hi Pascal, I really like the things you see and photograph. Love the way you've composed this shot with the colorful sandals arranged diagonally through the shot. But unfortunately it's not very sharp - I've done a workshop and I hope you don't mind.

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  • delfi Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor [C: 13 W: 17 N: 0] (63)
  • [2009-01-27 5:15]

Hello Pascal!


Well spotted. Two points for the spotting, colorfulness and mood/Athmosphere. Well done, TFS,


beautifully captured..
very colorful
i like the angle
thanks for sharing

Bonjour Pascal,
Belle composition et couleur magnifique ,j'aime bien moi aussi la prise en diagonale bien pensée.Bravo

Bonne journée,

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  • yanm Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 818 W: 84 N: 1189] (10601)
  • [2009-01-27 5:32]

I think you took this with a rather long lens so the focus is not throughout


powerful composition with strong colors, not spot on focus but can be managed.


i a n

la diagonale de tongues, bien vu
le besoin d'ajouter de la netteté, je ne l'ai pas ressenti en regardant la photo

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  • Nesa Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor [C: 59 W: 56 N: 23] (439)
  • [2009-01-27 23:05]

nice colors. interesting POV.

Hello Pascal. Very good composition and POV. Nice colors. TFS - Regards - Adil.

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  • cycle Gold Star Critiquer [C: 190 W: 0 N: 3] (1873)
  • [2009-01-29 8:03]

Hi Pascal,
Very beautifull captured with nice compo.

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  • korbee Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 1483 W: 0 N: 1852] (14495)
  • [2009-02-01 9:40]

Not the best quality in the world Pascal,but what an interesting picture this is.!


Wow Pascal!

Nice timing here. Well done mate.


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  • vbnv Silver Star Critiquer [C: 25 W: 0 N: 1] (426)
  • [2009-03-01 13:26]
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C'est une photo haute en couleurs comme je les aime. Le cadrage en biais est original ici.

  • Fortuna Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 3811 W: 2520 N: 16] (72)
  • [2012-04-03 18:30]

Olá Pascal,

Belas cores e excelente luz.
Também a perspectiva escolhida está ótima.


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