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Iran
Title: Trying for a piece of breadCanon 5D Mark II
Trying for a piece of bread (6)
amir_golipour Silver Star Critiquer [C: 43 W: 0 N: 1] (589)


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TasmaniaC Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 898 W: 240 N: 1062] (5886) [2013-07-02 16:06]
Excellent shot Amir, tight crop, strong contrast and clever composition.. well done

aK

Italy
Title: COLORFULCanon PowerShot G10
COLORFUL (22)
ayse51 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2092 W: 144 N: 2110] (27563)


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TasmaniaC Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 898 W: 240 N: 1062] (5886) [2013-05-30 22:51]
Gerçekten de renkler cıvıl cıvıl, dilimlerin yarattığı geometrik şekiller de çok güzel bir etki yaratmış, güzel bir fotoğraf, tebrikler..

aK

France
Title: t  r a n s p a r e n c ySony alpha 230
t r a n s p a r e n c y (22)
daisydaisy Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1518 W: 111 N: 1055] (5868)


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TasmaniaC Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 898 W: 240 N: 1062] (5886) [2013-05-05 2:09]
My favorite food/subject, well setup and composed photo Daisy, good job..

aK

Portugal
Title: Capelinhos LighthouseCanon EOS 5D MKII
Capelinhos Lighthouse (8)
SunToucher Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1376 W: 234 N: 1593] (8380)


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TasmaniaC Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 898 W: 240 N: 1062] (5886) [2013-05-05 2:05]
Hi Niek, good shot of this light house black & white suits well too, it seems a bit over-sharpened to me.. I'll add this to my theme of lighthouses, thanks..

aK

Canada
Title: White NoiseNikon D5100
White Noise (4)
BLR Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 90 W: 1 N: 143] (601)


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TasmaniaC Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 898 W: 240 N: 1062] (5886) [2013-04-07 18:14]
Very attractive piece of work you've got here Biance, out of focus and over exposure works in this context.. my choice would be the b&w version.. well done

aK

United States
Title: The EndNikon L 120
The End (10)
AC362 (77)


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TasmaniaC Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 898 W: 240 N: 1062] (5886) [2013-03-31 17:10] [2] - [workshop] [compare] [+]
Hi Andy, shooting towards the sun caused obvious over exposure and loss of detail in the land area. F stop should have been higher so the depth of field would have been higher since this is a scenic photo. I would have excluded the short building on the right which is not part of the lighthouse, placement of the lighthouse and the adjacent building are spot on but they sit in the horizontal center line, I've prepared two different workshop images to show how I would have done it.

Personally, I prefer photos without the signature on them. I would also suggest that you comment/critique others' photos as well. cheers..

I've also added your photo to my Lighthouses of the world theme :)

aK

France
Title: Ombre chinoisePentax K20D
Ombre chinoise (6)
iderverg Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 82 W: 0 N: 96] (1062)


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TasmaniaC Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 898 W: 240 N: 1062] (5886) [2013-03-30 3:19] [+]
Excellent capture of the shadows and the kite.. s'il vous plaît me dire le nom du phare

aK

New Zealand
Title: RangitotoPentax K10D
Rangitoto (21)
jackal Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 842 W: 26 N: 808] (9382)


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TasmaniaC Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 898 W: 240 N: 1062] (5886) [2013-03-12 5:43]
Another excellent shot that doesn't get the attention it deserves.. well captured photo Jack, I'd personally decrease the saturation just a touch though..

aK

Turkey
Title: Erzurum CitadelNikon D 90
Erzurum Citadel (10)
chrisJ Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 4430 W: 637 N: 9632] (55124)


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TasmaniaC Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 898 W: 240 N: 1062] (5886) [2013-02-18 21:12] - [workshop] [compare] [+]
Hi Chris, it is almost black & white, it sure looks cold as the sun goes down it would be freezing already.. I would have cropped the left side to exclude the wall or shift to the left to get a wider view of the houses but not sure what the conditions were there when you took the photo.. I just prepared a quick w/s adjust the white balance.. cheers

aK

Turkey
Title: Colorful pencilsCanon 40D
Colorful pencils (10)
broadcaster Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 633 W: 106 N: 142] (1421)


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TasmaniaC Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 898 W: 240 N: 1062] (5886) [2013-02-07 19:42]
Kalem ucunun kırığını nota yazıp hemen önlemini almışsın, geriye bulunacak bir nokta bırakmamışsın ki zaten Yasin.. güneş gibi bir gök kuşağı adeta, sol ve sağ alt köşelere gelen siyah ve beyaz kalemi aynı yerden keserdim ben olsam simetriyi yüzde yüze ulaştırmak için ama çok da dikkat çekmiyor..

aK

Turkey
Title: Seven Lakes
Seven Lakes (2)
broadcaster Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 633 W: 106 N: 142] (1421)


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TasmaniaC Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 898 W: 240 N: 1062] (5886) [2012-12-11 15:08]
Hmm, keyifler yerinde sanırım, huzur dolu bir manzara, sonbaharın sıcak renkleri çevreyi saran serinliği unutturuyor olmalı.. otuz saniyelik çekim suyun yüzeyinde ilerleyen yaprak ya da dalların çizikler oluşturmasına yol açmış ;) sade ve güzel bir çekim, imza biraz daha küçük olabilirmiş..

aK

Belgium
Title: * The king of forest *Sony A350
* The king of forest * (8)
john1 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 438 W: 0 N: 886] (8448)


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TasmaniaC Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 898 W: 240 N: 1062] (5886) [2012-12-09 4:30] - [workshop] [compare]
Hi John, such a beautiful place to be for a photo shoot. Excellent point of view and composition. I think that the white balance of the camera was not quite right at the time you took the photo. I've prepared a workshop with some adjustment, I hope you don't mind..

aK

Poland
Title: WoodNikon D70
Wood (22)
rychem Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 736 W: 13 N: 634] (21244)


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TasmaniaC Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 898 W: 240 N: 1062] (5886) [2012-12-06 21:37]
Fits the theme very well, shallow dof is quite effective too, good job Ryszard.

aK

United Kingdom
Title: Beach Huts IICanon EOS 1000D
Beach Huts II (32)
dipsybee Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 250 W: 111 N: 621] (2456)


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TasmaniaC Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 898 W: 240 N: 1062] (5886) [2012-12-03 14:30]
Good PP work Joy, , although colour version would have been lively, sky does not have deep blue tones, it was a good decision to play with the photo..

aK

Germany
Title: Autumn pearlsNikon D90 dSLR
Autumn pearls (30)
parasbhalla Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 3028 W: 438 N: 9280] (38525)


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TasmaniaC Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 898 W: 240 N: 1062] (5886) [2012-12-03 14:22]
Well captured moment before the droplets run down on the leaf Paras..

aK

Ecuador
Title: Otavalo fruit vendorSony DSC-H50
Otavalo fruit vendor (37)
CAROL50 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 853 W: 113 N: 2287] (8960)


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TasmaniaC Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 898 W: 240 N: 1062] (5886) [2012-11-22 19:05]
Very colourful and catchy, well composed photo Carol..

aK

Portugal
Title: The Fishing
The Fishing (38)
quaresma Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 18 W: 0 N: 14] (446)


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TasmaniaC Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 898 W: 240 N: 1062] (5886) [2012-11-22 16:46]
Excellent shot, running man on left is too close to the frame, may have been left out or may have waited for him to take another step or two, good job..

aK

United States
Title: HDG LighthouseCanon EOS Rebel T2i
HDG Lighthouse (2)
golden_eagle Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 54 W: 56 N: 63] (686)


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TasmaniaC Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 898 W: 240 N: 1062] (5886) [2012-11-20 20:35] [+]
Hi Daniel, I like the mirror effect on the water but in this case the top part of the photo is very cluttered by the lamp poles, the electric wires and the trees, I would have tried to take a shot from the grassy area, I'll add this to my Lighthouses theme, thanks.

aK

United States
Title: Almaden LakeEOS 5d Mark II
Almaden Lake (26)
VicZik Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 528 W: 82 N: 950] (4812)


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TasmaniaC Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 898 W: 240 N: 1062] (5886) [2012-11-20 20:30] [+]
Beautiful warm autumn colours, nice capture of the scenery Vic. I'm wondering why you did not post a large version (LP) for better viewing.. good job..

aK

Turkey
Title: handsome Mandarin
handsome Mandarin (4)
basria (131)


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TasmaniaC Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 898 W: 240 N: 1062] (5886) [2012-11-20 20:03]
This is a clear and sharp shot Basri, top part of the photo is overexposed, shooting from a higher angle may have prevented that. Not sure why you have chosen a vertical composition rather than horizontal which would have shown the beauty of the complete bird not the half of it and avoided the bright background.

aK