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Canada
Title: Totem PolesPentax K-5
Totem Poles (4)
hifimusicdai Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1281 W: 505 N: 2127] (15641)


Great

chrisJ Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 4430 W: 637 N: 9632] (55124) [2018-09-06 8:00] [+]
Hello David,

Nice to see the site functioning still. I've been there and these are pretty good close up shots in a warm bright light. Excellent colors and framing. Tfs!

Canada
Title: Metis Gardens - 2016 - 8Nikon D7100
Metis Gardens - 2016 - 8 (2)
pierrefonds Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 444 W: 3 N: 1323] (4863)


Great

chrisJ Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 4430 W: 637 N: 9632] (55124) [2018-09-06 7:59]
Hi Pierre

Good to see the site fixed. A nice close up shot of this attractive flower with good use of a shallow dof. Tfs!

New Zealand
Title: SeagullsPentax K3
Seagulls (14)
jackal Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 842 W: 26 N: 808] (9382)


Great

chrisJ Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 4430 W: 637 N: 9632] (55124) [2017-10-16 22:30]
Hello Jack

I like the repetition of the fg ripples in the sand which lift this superb sunset way above the ordinary. Nice silhouettes of the bg birds & they are just in the right spot of the highlighted sky. Tfs!

Mexico
Title: Rain dropsNikon D7000
Rain drops (14)
periko Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 119 W: 44 N: 32] (2157)


Great

chrisJ Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 4430 W: 637 N: 9632] (55124) [2017-10-16 11:11]
Hola Pedro

Nice repetition of the raindrops with superb use of a shallow dof. Good diffused lighting and an unobtrusive bg. Nice reflections too. Tfs!

United Kingdom
Title: Glory House
Glory House (2)
marine-coeur Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 702 W: 0 N: 93] (4697)


 

chrisJ Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 4430 W: 637 N: 9632] (55124) [2017-10-16 10:34]
Hi Marine,

I walked past the scene in Las Vegas and through the Luxor Hotel next door back in 2008 when the world was a little less crazy. Such a tragic and senseless act. Tfs!

http://www.treklens.com/viewphotos.php?l=7&p=491677

Brazil
Title: Lights and shadowsCanon EOS 5D Mark II
Lights and shadows (8)
mesquens1 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2632 W: 147 N: 2136] (40773)


Great

chrisJ Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 4430 W: 637 N: 9632] (55124) [2017-10-16 10:24] [+]
Hi Raimundo,

A lovely sunset but just lacking a little sharpness. It's easy to blur the sky if increased grain is a problem. I like the warm cold color contrasts between the hot and cold colours. Fabulous silhouettes. Tfs!

South Africa
Title: Many Stripes.Canon EOS 600D
Many Stripes. (8)
Jonathan Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 820 W: 0 N: 376] (13973)


Great

chrisJ Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 4430 W: 637 N: 9632] (55124) [2017-10-16 10:22]
Hello Erwin

Nice choice of black and white which suits the zebras subject. Fantastic graphism & effective tight framing on the fg trio. Adequate breathing space too. Tfs!

Canada
Title: Cruise visit to VancouverPentax K-5
Cruise visit to Vancouver (8)
hifimusicdai Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1281 W: 505 N: 2127] (15641)


Great

chrisJ Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 4430 W: 637 N: 9632] (55124) [2017-10-16 10:19] [+]
Hi David,

Punchy light contrasts from the good density levels that have given clean whites and solid blacks. Superb sharpness and a fine upward pov on this floating city. You'd be surprised how many thousands of people can fit aboard these behemoths. Tfs!

France
Title: my hobbies ?
my hobbies ? (10)
daisydaisy Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1518 W: 111 N: 1055] (5868)


Great

chrisJ Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 4430 W: 637 N: 9632] (55124) [2017-10-16 10:13]
Salut Daisy

Nice repetition of the red blue and grey hats all in sharp focus. Good idea to use selective focus to throw the bg oof. Nice color and framing. Tfs!

Canada
Title: Order of ThingsCanon 50D
Order of Things (4)
Soundsangels Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 795 W: 8 N: 1087] (14031)


Great

chrisJ Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 4430 W: 637 N: 9632] (55124) [2017-10-16 10:11] [+]
Bonjour Claude

Smart choice of a vertical format with excellent pp work & impeccable sharpness. The stylised skeletons in the fg are intriguing and the veiled women look remorseful or tired. Tfs!

Canada
Title: Car - 2017 - 1Nikon D7100
Car - 2017 - 1 (4)
pierrefonds Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 444 W: 3 N: 1323] (4863)


Great

chrisJ Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 4430 W: 637 N: 9632] (55124) [2017-10-16 10:08]
Salut Pierre

Good to get an interior shot of the car for a change. I like the tight framing and downward pov. Excellent sharpness and density levels too. Tfs!

Denmark
Title: SilenceLeica V-Lux 4
Silence (2)
mrmike1935 Silver Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 31 W: 0 N: 213] (4504)


 

cdplayer Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 99 W: 14 N: 45] (454) [2017-05-10 4:11] [+]
I think the composition is interesting.
Did you want the image to be sharp near the bottom half of the photo?
The lighting of image keeps me engaged.

South Africa
Title: My Puppy.Canon EOS 600D
My Puppy. (6)
Jonathan Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 820 W: 0 N: 376] (13973)


Needs Improvement

cdplayer Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 99 W: 14 N: 45] (454) [2017-05-10 4:00]
The overall mood of the image feels so good! Lots of love!
If the light on the paw of the dog be toned down a bit make this image stronger?
My eye is drawn to the bottom right of the image. Could there be too much light?

Romania
Title: YELLOW SPOT
YELLOW SPOT (5)
marius-secan Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 20 W: 0 N: 13] (453)


Good

cdplayer Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 99 W: 14 N: 45] (454) [2017-05-10 3:54]
Nice catch light in the eye!
Excellent DOF!
Would positioning the bird a little to the left make this image stronger?
Well done!

Costa Rica
Title: Lady in red
Lady in red (2)
rintile Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 979 W: 66 N: 2708] (15972)


 

cdplayer Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 99 W: 14 N: 45] (454) [2017-05-10 3:49]
I am enjoying the composition of the image!
Were the roses move from another image onto the black background?
Interesting detail applied to the flowers.

France
Title: Le tourbillon de la Vie
Le tourbillon de la Vie (8)
jods Silver Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 21 W: 0 N: 101] (578)


Great

cdplayer Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 99 W: 14 N: 45] (454) [2017-05-10 3:43]
This image is amazing!
If I didn't know any better I would think this was a port of an oil painting.
Very even lighting!

South Africa
Title: SeagiullCanon EOS 600D
Seagiull (6)
Jonathan Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 820 W: 0 N: 376] (13973)


Needs Improvement

cdplayer Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 99 W: 14 N: 45] (454) [2017-05-10 3:37]
The composition of the image is great!
Was the bird place on the black background?
Too much light on the breast of the bird, not enough detail.

South Africa
Title: Lunch
Lunch (7)
jackal Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 842 W: 26 N: 808] (9382)


Good

cdplayer Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 99 W: 14 N: 45] (454) [2017-05-10 3:32]
nice DOF! Makes us look at what you want us to look at, the food.
To make this image stronger, suggesting having the eye as part of the image would help this image.
Like the rim lighting!

India
Title: YellowNikon Coolpix L20
Yellow (1)
bidyutbera (141)


Good

cdplayer Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 99 W: 14 N: 45] (454) [2017-05-10 3:28] [+]
Lighting well controlled!
Did you spray water on the flower?
Like the positioning of the flower.
The DOF could have been increased a litle.
love your yellow!

Turkey
Title: MY NaMe iS ReD
MY NaMe iS ReD (1)
sarpyigit (47)


Good

cdplayer Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 99 W: 14 N: 45] (454) [2017-05-10 3:24]
love the texture and the rhythm!
Super sharp! Just enough light!
Nice job!