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Canada
Title: Going downCanon EOS 500 D Rebel T 1 i
Going down (5)
iso Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 981 W: 61 N: 169] (29412)


Good

zto Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 916 W: 122 N: 48] (329) [2020-07-05 16:00]
Good use of the spiral shape.

Canada
Title: Black & WhiteCanon EOS 500 D Rebel T 1 i
Black & White (7)
iso Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 981 W: 61 N: 169] (29412)


Good

zto Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 916 W: 122 N: 48] (329) [2020-07-05 16:00]
Nice abstract kind of. I like it. Crips. Clean, Good focus. Good DOF

Denmark
Title: On TrialLeica V-Lux 4
On Trial (÷)
mrmike1935 Silver Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 31 W: 0 N: 213] (4650)


Needs Improvement

zto Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 916 W: 122 N: 48] (329) [2020-07-05 15:56] [+]
This is better. We see the face. But I can also see she is not 'in' the picture. Next time. Walk up, talk to her. Tell her what story you want to tell. It is about here. She is in the picture but she is still not there. It is not her story. What is her story? Again there are distractions. The lady on the phone. It would have been better to isolate your subject from the surrounding. Do you want to picture things as you see them or do you want to tell a story?

Denmark
Title: To the AnklesLeica V-Lux 4
To the Ankles (÷)
mrmike1935 Silver Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 31 W: 0 N: 213] (4650)


Needs Improvement

zto Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 916 W: 122 N: 48] (329) [2020-07-05 15:52] [+]
Kind of interesting with her long hair and the baby. I wish there was more space for her to 'walk into'. A lot of distracting elements, like the lamp, the person right in front, sort of by her nose (red jacket), the man by her elbow (blue shirt). The guy in the cap might have worked but with all three of them, and the vent just by her head. It is more of a family album type of shot. When taking a picture, always look for distracting elements and eliminate them. You also take a lot, all, pictures from behind. Perhaps it is time to challenge yourself and try and show us their faces. You wanted to illustrate the hair. You did that right. But it does not grab. Don't be shy. Next time, ask if you can take the picture and focus on what it is you want to show. it could have been a close-up or even a panorama where the hair played a central role. Now, it is a woman with a baby that has long hair.

Pakistan
Title: ShadedOlympus Stylus TG 850
Shaded (÷)
mamcg Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 452 W: 66 N: 1002] (10640)


Needs Improvement

zto Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 916 W: 122 N: 48] (329) [2020-07-05 15:44]
I will follow up on my previous comment. Apart from the color, there is no difference between the two pictures. Try to think...what makes THIS rose special. How can I capture the SOUL of THIS rose. The flower has beautiful colors and patterns. How can you use that to make a stunning picture?

Pakistan
Title: RoseOlympus Stylus TG 850
Rose (÷)
mamcg Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 452 W: 66 N: 1002] (10640)


Needs Improvement

zto Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 916 W: 122 N: 48] (329) [2020-07-05 15:42] [+]
You should try different angles. From below, from the side, etc. At the moment, it is just a picture of a rose but there is no emotion or story behind it. The DOF and focus are good, but in the end, it's just a rose. Sorry, it may sound hard but I think you can do better and we are here to learn...right... I think you have the opportunity to do better. You have the technique. Now try to work on composition and emotion.

United Kingdom
Title: My GrandmotherPentax K10D
My Grandmother (4)
jackal Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 793 W: 26 N: 808] (9649)


Great

zto Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 916 W: 122 N: 48] (329) [2020-07-05 15:38]
Well done on the pp work!

Italy
Title: Polyommatus icarus
Polyommatus icarus (12)
Silvio2006 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 4566 W: 106 N: 6071] (54757)


Great

zto Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 916 W: 122 N: 48] (329) [2020-05-19 0:05]
I am still waiting for the day when I manage to capture a butterfly-like this. Hoping to have some luck in the summer when the flowers are out. Great sharpness and focus. The light is also very well managed. Thank you also for the informative note.

Pakistan
Title: Bud & BloomSony NEX 5R
Bud & Bloom (4)
mamcg Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 452 W: 66 N: 1002] (10640)


Great

zto Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 916 W: 122 N: 48] (329) [2020-05-19 0:02]
Well captured and nice collours in the background.

New Zealand
Title: s e r e n i t yNikon D90
s e r e n i t y (10)
moli Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1349 W: 256 N: 2110] (13342)


Great

zto Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 916 W: 122 N: 48] (329) [2020-05-19 0:01]
Lovely capture. Nice light and mood.

Pakistan
Title: GraffitiPanasonic Lumix FZ 2500
Graffiti (1)
mamcg Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 452 W: 66 N: 1002] (10640)


Good

zto Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 916 W: 122 N: 48] (329) [2020-05-13 15:11]
I like it. I like tha hand prints.

United Kingdom
Title: can u see the...
can u see the... (3)
marine-coeur Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 722 W: 0 N: 93] (4809)


Good

zto Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 916 W: 122 N: 48] (329) [2020-05-13 0:53] [+]
I see a hart to the left side of the picture. Is that what you see too? May I ask what it is?

Pakistan
Title: Pose for mePanasonic Lumix FZ 2500
Pose for me (1)
mamcg Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 452 W: 66 N: 1002] (10640)


Good

zto Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 916 W: 122 N: 48] (329) [2020-05-13 0:52]
A pretty little girl and well-lit portrait.

New Zealand
Title: Moment of ImpactPentax K10D
Moment of Impact (2)
jackal Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 793 W: 26 N: 808] (9649)


Great

zto Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 916 W: 122 N: 48] (329) [2020-05-13 0:51]
Well, this can not have been easy jack. How many swings did it take until you hit the bulb? :D You seem to have some elaborate kit with sound triggers and all. Actually, the brand of your chosen club helps here as it is a fusion of two objects for one phot.

Denmark
Title: ShipsLeica V-Lux 4
Ships (1)
mrmike1935 Silver Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 31 W: 0 N: 213] (4650)


Good

zto Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 916 W: 122 N: 48] (329) [2020-05-13 0:49] [+]
a good capture which illustrates the point you provide in the note.

Australia
Title: k o a l aNikon D90
k o a l a (6)
moli Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1349 W: 256 N: 2110] (13342)


Great

zto Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 916 W: 122 N: 48] (329) [2020-05-13 0:47]
The cutest little cuddled bears. Nice capture. I felt for them during the wildfires.

New Zealand
Title: Balloon burstingPentax K3
Balloon bursting (8)
jackal Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 793 W: 26 N: 808] (9649)


Great

zto Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 916 W: 122 N: 48] (329) [2020-05-11 5:22]
Looks like glass shattering. Really great pic Jack

France
Title: the gentleman and the chessboard
the gentleman and the chessboard (6)
daisydaisy Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1484 W: 111 N: 1055] (5943)


Great

zto Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 916 W: 122 N: 48] (329) [2020-05-10 7:01]
Nice shot and nice B&W conversion.

New Zealand
Title: Bubble splashPentax K10D
Bubble splash (4)
jackal Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 793 W: 26 N: 808] (9649)


Great

zto Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 916 W: 122 N: 48] (329) [2020-05-10 6:32]
This is a great shot, Jack. Well done. One of your best so far i think.

New Zealand
Title: l o n e l yNikon D90
l o n e l y (4)
moli Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1349 W: 256 N: 2110] (13342)


Great

zto Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 916 W: 122 N: 48] (329) [2020-05-07 13:28]
Beautiful and tranquil.