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funlanz (0) [2012-03-24 14:25]

Could it ever be forgotten, even in one's dreams?
Those old familiar landscapes
Within my heart are longed,
Though many years have passed now
The time has not assuaged.
The willow trees in springtime,
The ducklings on the pond,
The scent of sweet roses
Bring memories dear and fond.
rugged terrain that traveled far
And made a boundary line
Enclosed a world that I knew best
With treasures I called mine.
A sprawling house of many rooms
And stair with spiral rail
Overlooked a broad expanse
That often I would trail.
I've travelled to a distant place
Where friends have been so kind,
But old familiar landscapes
Are etched upon my mind.

beautiful..thanks for posting..i grew up here.. __funlanz

VisualArtist_99 Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 56 W: 20 N: 88] (487) [2011-04-16 4:20] [+]

Magandang gabi, Raul!
This is a nice portrait. It's a good idea turning this to B&W. The frame and the whole picture itself gives a classic look to the photo.
Is she a Filipino too?

Nice job!

TFS!


-Irene

samiran88 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 181 W: 75 N: 140] (991) [2011-04-04 8:49]

very nice picture of an orchid, nice POV also. thanks.
Samiran

AndroK Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor [C: 2110 W: 41 N: 0] (15189) [2011-04-04 7:16]

Hi Raul...
Nice macro with so nice focus...
Nice details and colors...
Regards...
Andrija

pejhwak Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 188 W: 23 N: 46] (1279) [2011-04-03 9:07]

Hi
A very sharp macro of this fabulous flower. Good PP work to obtain such vivid color saturation.
I like the lighting and the accurate details of the stamens.
Very colorful and contrasty flower

PeterDF Silver Star Critiquer [C: 21 W: 0 N: 2] (14) [2011-03-03 6:20]

Beautiful photo here of this lovely area. The wonderful tree and misty clouds surrounding these peaks really make for a great capture here. When I first saw this...it reminded me of a scene from Africa for some reason...but it's very nicely done by you.

dipsybee Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 250 W: 111 N: 621] (2456) [2011-03-02 8:01]

Hi Raul,

This is a great atmospheric shot. B/W is the right choice to make the most of this mist and light. There is good depth too. I like the capture of the little house on the slopes, it shows the scale. Haunting and moody image.

Regards

Joy

AndroK Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor [C: 2110 W: 41 N: 0] (15189) [2011-03-02 6:27]

Hi Raul...
Nice [email protected] shot with so nice fog effect...
Regards...
Andrija

fransx Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2938 W: 134 N: 7397] (41704) [2011-03-02 4:26]

Hi Raul,
A very dreamy atmosphere in this valley shot!
Nice misty ambient adorned with this mysterious light. Great B&W rendition of this landscape shot. An agreeable POV with a considerable depth.
Very neat work with the appropriate contrast.
Well done,

Francis Xavier

pushpinder Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 96 W: 6 N: 178] (1483) [2011-02-15 9:23] [+]

Delightful picture..
A little crop from the top may be in order...
I love the layers formed!!
Cut the text in the middle!