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ceBen (227) [2014-05-23 1:28]

Hi Ruby!
The light and the reflects are very good and the composition too.
Next time try that focus on the window and the rain drops on it. The colors and light will be blurred in the background. I think these picture has a great atmosphere.
Good luck!
ceBen

Jonathan Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 816 W: 0 N: 376] (13989) [2014-05-02 6:42]

Hi Ruby,
Great bokeh creating a strong emphasis on your main subject. The sparrow is pinsharp showing its colora and natural tones exquisitely. It seems to be eyeing you out and showing a proud pose.
erwin...

wackymob Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 485 W: 160 N: 955] (6851) [2014-05-02 3:43]

Hi Ruby, a nice clear and detailed shot with some light in his eye. He seems very intent on whatever has caught his attention. Fiona

jean11-3 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 1481 W: 0 N: 3257] (16374) [2014-05-01 11:43]

Hello Ruby, a lovely sharp shot of the Sparrow.
Although a common little bird,when seen close up, he is a pretty little creature.
Well done.
Tfs, regards Jean.

Silvio2006 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 4566 W: 106 N: 6071] (54757) [2014-05-01 5:14]

Ciao Ruby, lovely composition with nice sparrow on beautiful blurry BG, fine details, splendid sharpness and wonderful warm colors, very well done, my friend, ciao Silvio

shaukatmi Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1012 W: 422 N: 2711] (10141) [2014-04-30 17:14]

Hello, Ruby. Lovely photograph of common bird, the, colors and composition looks really good. Presentation is also excellent and the transitional plumage of the bird looks really nice. Thanks for sharing.

bobsmith Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 499 W: 360 N: 126] (1886) [2014-04-30 8:54]

Hi Ruby

A very sharp image, well captured.
Possibly the bird is a little central, maybe some of the left hand side could have been cropped out. Just a thought...

Kaliakar Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor [C: 76 W: 71 N: 3] (4) [2013-10-21 23:49]

beautiful shot. Well balanced and good composition.

Kaliakar Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor [C: 76 W: 71 N: 3] (4) [2013-10-21 23:45]

I really like the atmosphere of this. Also your text goes very well with the photo.

Clanyi Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 254 W: 7 N: 100] (7129) [2013-05-20 3:40]

Hi Ruby! Beautiful sunrise, nice colors and tones. Best regards Csabi