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roald Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 64 W: 57 N: 65] (773) [2011-03-29 19:16]

hi behnam

nice compo, crop and selective desat. really calls the viewers attention even from the thumbnail. my congratulation.

roald

roald Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 64 W: 57 N: 65] (773) [2011-03-22 18:59]

hi jamie

i guess worth the wait for you. love the compo and colour. i like how you have captured the shadows in front of the sheeps.

roald

roald Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 64 W: 57 N: 65] (773) [2010-05-10 9:01]

hi mehrdad

im always attracted with this sort of shots. a street, documentary genre. the PP (desat) works well with your compo. the only thing i noticed is the banding all over is so obvious and a distraction. i guess the reason is too much sharpening and you have saved it on a 101k size. aside from that, good work.

roald

roald Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 64 W: 57 N: 65] (773) [2010-04-08 17:54]

ola jose

always admire B&W especially with street photos like this. i guess it brings out the emotions of your subject that you are presenting. it removes all the distraction of colour. just love the look on the girls face. so secured.

one thing though, a little more room to the right to give some space to what the guy is looking at will add more impact to the compo. IMHO opinion.

roald

roald Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 64 W: 57 N: 65] (773) [2010-02-07 8:42]

hi carol

i like the compo. the guy had to stoop just to fit in the small window and you have cleverly crop it so near the edge like making it more difficult for him.

re: increased the exposure, it loss some details especially on the column. nevertheless, still works for me.

roald

roald Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 64 W: 57 N: 65] (773) [2010-01-23 11:09]

hi andres

wow! looks like miniature models. very good presentation. good exposure.
you're still awake at 4am? in the desert? :)

roald

roald Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 64 W: 57 N: 65] (773) [2010-01-22 21:15]

hi carol

very good exposure, the details are so well captured. the thing i like most is the reflection of the lights in the water, looks like fire. my congratulation.

roald

roald Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 64 W: 57 N: 65] (773) [2010-01-22 0:08]

simply beautiful. POV, DOF, colours, specially the vibrant ones comes out very well, not an in your face kind of. my congratulation.

roald

roald Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 64 W: 57 N: 65] (773) [2010-01-15 22:04]

hi derek

good use of shallow DOF on architecture. it really works here, makes the changing huts stands out more without compromising the beautiful sky. well done.

roald

roald Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 64 W: 57 N: 65] (773) [2010-01-14 23:18]

hi nara

so natural and so beautiful. good ambiance captured and presented. well done.

roald