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mcmxcvii Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 86 W: 29 N: 162] (934) [2010-02-12 5:42]

hi there,

love the 1:2 ratio composition n the camels in the foreground. u should've had a ride, its once in a life time experience. its unlike riding a horse where u keep bouncing, camel ride is different where u sway back n forth.

tfs
mehmood

mcmxcvii Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 86 W: 29 N: 162] (934) [2010-02-12 5:35]

salaam aghai mushtaq,

love the formation of clouds n the contrast of orange n blue. interesting note to finish it off.

tfs
mehmood

mcmxcvii Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 86 W: 29 N: 162] (934) [2010-02-12 5:32]

hi there,

beautiful abstract, love the contrasting colours n the lines which are leading everywhere.

tfs
mehmood

mcmxcvii Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 86 W: 29 N: 162] (934) [2010-02-12 5:28]

i really like this one, love the partial saturation work which brings out ur subject. nicely composed with good details.

tfs
mehmood

mcmxcvii Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 86 W: 29 N: 162] (934) [2010-02-12 5:25]

salaam aqai abid,

glad to see u back n congrats on the new lens once again. aah! i see u boosted the 'iso', ur camera does have an iso button after all heh heh. good catchlight in the eyes n nice pose by this angel.

tfs
mehmood

mcmxcvii Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 86 W: 29 N: 162] (934) [2010-02-12 5:14] [+]

hi galder,

he's one cool guy, his vibrant orange shirt tells that he's still young at heart. i like the composition n ur pp work to isolate him from bg.

tfs
mehmood

mcmxcvii Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 86 W: 29 N: 162] (934) [2010-02-12 5:11]

hi there,

u were right on time to execute this one. awesome pov of once the tallest building(s). i like the tree silhouette on the left, kinda balances the photo. try 'nasi kandar' next time u visit KL.

tfs
mehmood

mcmxcvii Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 86 W: 29 N: 162] (934) [2010-02-12 5:08]

hi there,

i like the 1/3 composition n the shadow fill the foreground well. love the gradient in the sky. beautiful n unusual.

tfs
mehmood

mcmxcvii Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 86 W: 29 N: 162] (934) [2010-02-11 22:07]

hi there,

love ur pp work, the application of warm filter effect. branches, reflection, composition already praised by mr.shaukat :)

tfs
mehmood

mcmxcvii Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 86 W: 29 N: 162] (934) [2010-02-11 21:57] [+]

hi there,

i like the use of wide aperture which isolates ur subject from the BG. would've looked better if u had taken a step back to include is whole head n a little crop from the top to place it in the prime zone.

tfs
mehmood