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gringofil Gold Star Critiquer [C: 104 W: 6 N: 0] (0) [2004-07-12 9:45] [2]

Very nice. I really like the compo with the open palm and the pills scattered about. The desaturation works nicely as well in this case...usually I'm totally against it. Quite a simple and interesting image. Well done.

gringofil Gold Star Critiquer [C: 104 W: 6 N: 0] (0) [2004-07-12 9:23] [2]

It's nice that you try to experiment with photography...I used to do it a lot when I began fiddling around with this hobby. I really like this shot for the subject itself...the glass of beer. On the technical side, there can be lots of improvements made. I don't care for the central placement and the hot lights here and there distract from the viewing. I propose a crop. For more, look at the workshop.

gringofil Gold Star Critiquer [C: 104 W: 6 N: 0] (0) [2004-07-10 12:04]

MAN, this is one SEXY shot...I've got something for good looking feet. The compo is excellent IMO and the pastel colors of the background work well with your...hmmmm...subject. Excellent, excellent work. Well done!

gringofil Gold Star Critiquer [C: 104 W: 6 N: 0] (0) [2004-07-10 12:02]

Excellent, informative note, but the image itself is quite dissapointing. What you've got here, basically, is a baby deer. Now, you were shooting from above (big NO NO compo wise). I really wish I could see the animal running around a field or something. Also, you cropped off one of its feet. Anyway, great note, but the image needs work.

gringofil Gold Star Critiquer [C: 104 W: 6 N: 0] (0) [2004-07-10 11:58] [2]

Quite an interesting animal, but given the fact that the bat itself is a total mass of blackness with no features visible, it makes it hard for me to apreciate the photo. I wish you pulled out a bit more detail so we can actually see your subject. Compo is fine IMO, but the background needs to be blurred a little more as well.

gringofil Gold Star Critiquer [C: 104 W: 6 N: 0] (0) [2004-07-01 10:06]

This is very cool. I like the angle and tilt, the grain from the film is another nice touch and the overall emptiness of the scenery makes for a very effective photo. This is excellent photography. Well done.

gringofil Gold Star Critiquer [C: 104 W: 6 N: 0] (0) [2004-07-01 9:56]

This is really nice. I usually enjoy high key shots with a lot of negative space if they are well done...and this one certainly is. Great position of your subject plus the fact that we can see bits and pieces of the floor as well. Excellent work.