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daynaken Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 360 W: 36 N: 245] (1289) [2008-02-20 14:46]

I like the effect you captured with your idea. It makes the eye really stand out. The eye is quite sharp and in good focus. The front of your photo is a little soft compared to the deeper part. I would have prefered to see an equal balance of focus.
Over all good photo. Great idea for a shot. TFS
Dayna

daynaken Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 360 W: 36 N: 245] (1289) [2007-07-13 17:09]

I like this series you are doing, you are capturing these people in such a natural setting and they look relaxed and comfortable. The colors are complimentary and show off such detail.
Great use of natural light, good POV and DOF. I like the POV you choose, the pose they are in looks perfect for a father and daughter portrait. TFS
Dayna

daynaken Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 360 W: 36 N: 245] (1289) [2007-07-13 15:26]

Cute shot, I like the angle you choose to capture the birds face. It really does look like she is asking a question.
Good clarity and detail, nice use of natural lighting. TFS
Dayna

daynaken Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 360 W: 36 N: 245] (1289) [2007-07-12 21:52]

I think you made the right choice in the closer crop, this is a wonderful portrait. I like how the chief is in such sharp detail and the bg is soft. It makes him stand out in great detail. I love the colors of his clothes. I do see a little over exposure on his shoulder to my right. Good composition. TFS
Dayna

daynaken Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 360 W: 36 N: 245] (1289) [2007-07-12 21:38]

I have never seen this flower before, it is quite unusual, it is beautiful, good color and details. I like the POV you choose to show a little of the flowers 'nest' below, I do agree with Kilted that a closer crop would have set it off better. TFS

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Kicki Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 181 W: 0 N: 53] (1189)

Great

daynaken Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 360 W: 36 N: 245] (1289) [2007-07-06 11:29]

Wonderful macro shot, I really like how you were able to get such good detail of the wings. You were also able to show off the wooliness of the bee well. The green grass makes such a nice bg for the bee also. TFS
Dayna

daynaken Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 360 W: 36 N: 245] (1289) [2007-07-06 11:24]

I like this shot, it is better balanced than the first one of this building. I like how it is a little under exposed since it seems to bring out more of the details. The way this looks with no trees around it makes it stand out even more, it also adds to the mood of desolation. Nicely composed. TFS
Dayna

daynaken Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 360 W: 36 N: 245] (1289) [2007-06-10 15:45]

This is an eye catching photo. I like the circular lines that you captured through the tunnel. I like the details that you captured through the thin fabric of the tunnel. I also like your choice in presenting it in b/w. TFS
Dayna

daynaken Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 360 W: 36 N: 245] (1289) [2007-06-10 13:13] [+]

Wayne,
I know we all take photos we don't at first like, then after further study sometimes we find things in them that we suddenly like.
The double shadow of the dancing pair is one of the first things that stood out to me. You can somewhat see the fathers face, he looks almost sad, or melancholy. Is it that his little girl has grown up? I believe the use of b/w really brings out the shadows. It looks almost dreamy. A perfect effect for the touching photo. TFS
Dayna

daynaken Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 360 W: 36 N: 245] (1289) [2007-06-09 23:38] [+]

This is a beautiful flower, I can't believe the bold bright colors in this flower. You captured it wonderfully. I like how you made the focus on the back petals it really draws the focus completely through the shot. The dark background really makes the flower pop out of the shot. The yellow and purple are make such a good contrast. TFS
Dayna