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captive-light Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 84 W: 22 N: 266] (1582) [2016-03-22 2:15]

Love the POV - took me a while to notice we are looking straight down on the cat rather then along at it which would make it a gravity defying cat. The tail and body create a nice lead in to those eyes as does the hanging thing ... Nicely done :)

captive-light Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 84 W: 22 N: 266] (1582) [2016-02-10 4:52]

Kung Hei Fat Choy mini panther - what I like about this is that there is almost nothing to give a sense of size and with the cat filling the screen it could so easily be a panther ...

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Title: Lunch
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farradhim Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 104 W: 50 N: 157] (1466)

 

captive-light Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 84 W: 22 N: 266] (1582) [2016-02-09 12:49] [+]

It's a good idea to feed the crows and gives you an opportunity to bring them in to photograph, especially in winter when food is scarce. Do it enough and they will get used to it making it easier on you! For me personally it's a shame that the detail in the crow's head area is so soft and lacking detail which I'm guessing is where the crow is starting to move off - I like the wing blur, that gives it life but would have liked to see the head sharp. As these birds are coming down to feed, maybe feeding them somewhere where the sun shines on them from behind you (as much as possible) and maybe open up the aperture a little to around F5.6 or so to give you a faster shutter speed? Just some ideas ...

captive-light Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 84 W: 22 N: 266] (1582) [2016-02-09 12:40] [+]

I like the central placement and the sense of depth this had. The figure adds a sense of scale to the image, although I might have been tempted not to include it as the shadow makes it a little messy. I keep wondering if the wind is blowing from left to right which would explain the fountains not being quite symetrical ... but that's just me!

captive-light Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 84 W: 22 N: 266] (1582) [2016-02-09 1:11]

Sharp where it needs to be on the eyes and beak, little bit of movement in the leg to add life and filling the frame. It all works for me ...

As for what bird it is ... it's one of those little brown and white birds that run along the beach!

captive-light Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 84 W: 22 N: 266] (1582) [2016-02-09 1:08]

Sharp, too the point and tells the story. Goof OOF background and good light on the subject. Well done.

captive-light Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 84 W: 22 N: 266] (1582) [2016-02-09 1:06]

I like this ... the wintery light goes so well with the clouds giving it an atmospheric feel which compliments the standing stones.

captive-light Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 84 W: 22 N: 266] (1582) [2015-12-16 1:40]

I love this one ... the colours of the leaves work really well with the mask and the black adds an air of mystery. Well done.

captive-light Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 84 W: 22 N: 266] (1582) [2015-11-25 11:01]

I like the colours on the hopper, flowers and the other beetle adds an element of life in to the picture. I do wish that bean wasn't in the way though!

captive-light Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 84 W: 22 N: 266] (1582) [2015-09-07 4:00]

One of Angie's frogs? She treats her frogs really carefully. Love the colours and details here as well as the patterns in the leaf that lead in to the frog. Nice image. :)