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bowes Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 34 W: 0 N: 29] (303) [2007-01-10 21:04] [+]

Great macro! Good sharpness and dof. The inner frame is a little too much to my taste..
But other than that it's a great shot!
All the best / Eric

bowes Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 34 W: 0 N: 29] (303) [2007-01-10 20:59]

Great portrait! I bet she was pleased with it.
I like the close crop and her great expression.
All the best / Eric

bowes Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 34 W: 0 N: 29] (303) [2007-01-10 20:57]

Lovely shot with beautiful colours! Nice composition, although I'd probably have cropped the right side slightly looser to include the full bend of the flower bed.
Good work, Marie-Josť!
All the best / Eric

bowes Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 34 W: 0 N: 29] (303) [2007-01-10 20:53] [+]

Excellent sharpness and dof and great detail.
This brings back fond memories of my one-eyed macaw, Bert, who used to sit on my shoulder and bite my ear :-)
All the best / Eric

bowes Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 34 W: 0 N: 29] (303) [2007-01-10 20:49]

Good composition and great colours! I'm not sure about the PS effect but that's just personal taste.
Well seen, Carla!
All the best / Eric

bowes Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 34 W: 0 N: 29] (303) [2007-01-10 20:45] [+]

I really like this one! The B&W tones are great as is the composition. I would like a tad more sky.. I think.. Hm, not sure now..
Anyway, great shot!
All the best / Eric

bowes Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 34 W: 0 N: 29] (303) [2007-01-10 20:36]

Nice capture with lovely colours. I think I'd crop a bit off the top to exclude the power lines and to get the bridge off centre. Also, it might be due to downsizing but it seems to need a little sharpening.
All the best / Eric

Canada
Title: friends
friends (12)
rgagnon Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 288 W: 124 N: 182] (2390)

Great

bowes Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 34 W: 0 N: 29] (303) [2007-01-10 20:30]

You've captured some wonderful expressions! I like the shallow dof putting the guy slightly oof. The tight crop works really well. It seems your point of focus was on the skee glasses rather than her face. Maybe some selective sharpening would be good just to get her face a bit more crisp.
All the best / Eric

Moldova
Title: Different
Different (10)
deud Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 178 W: 7 N: 28] (1328)

Great

bowes Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 34 W: 0 N: 29] (303) [2007-01-10 20:18]

Good idea and well executed. Good simple composition. I think a slightly lower pov and lower lighting with longer shadows would have enhanced the effect.
Good work, Dan!
All the best / Eric

bowes Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 34 W: 0 N: 29] (303) [2007-01-10 20:13]

Nice shot with a sort of dreamy atmosphere. I like the composition. I would have preferred brighter windows and some more detail in the dark areas.
Good work, Leith!
All the best / Eric