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LenScapp Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor [C: 184 W: 60 N: 58] (35) [2007-02-07 17:07]

The exposure is very good but I find the shapes in the foreground a little uninteresting.
Barry

LenScapp Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor [C: 184 W: 60 N: 58] (35) [2007-02-07 17:04]

Nice lighting on your model and good pose. As it is natural to read L to R our eyes are immediately focussed on the flowers which are a strong picture on their own. this means your beautiful model is having to compete with the flowers which is a great shame.
Barry

LenScapp Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor [C: 184 W: 60 N: 58] (35) [2007-02-07 16:59] [+]

Well exposed for the white flower. I think I would prefer it in the portrait mode.
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LenScapp Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor [C: 184 W: 60 N: 58] (35) [2006-11-24 14:17] [+]

The clouds are very dramatic and yet the blueness gives a calming feeling.
Well done Michael
Barry

LenScapp Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor [C: 184 W: 60 N: 58] (35) [2006-11-24 11:22] [+]

Hi Huub
Only you can get away with an image where the person is on the extreme edge and walking out of the picture!! It works very well. The repetitive of the doors allow the eye to rest on the pilot nicely.
Barry
PS Have done WS just for fun. Hope you don't mind.

LenScapp Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor [C: 184 W: 60 N: 58] (35) [2006-11-23 15:37] [+]

Well spotted robert. i like the humourous touch. I like the placement of the van to break up the monotony of the green.
Barry
PS I see you had the nerve to criticise the the great Magda's work. Isn't it time you realised her work is faultless. LOL

LenScapp Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor [C: 184 W: 60 N: 58] (35) [2006-11-23 15:13] [+]

Hi David.
You may not do Turkey Day down there but we do Christmas Day up here and I'm looking forward to my annual Gobbler.
That one nearest the camera has a lovely head and neck-did you get a close up?
Barry

LenScapp Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor [C: 184 W: 60 N: 58] (35) [2006-10-30 16:24]

Beautiful lighting gives the picture a painterly feel
Barry

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Usaf Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 319 W: 87 N: 312] (2160)

Good

LenScapp Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor [C: 184 W: 60 N: 58] (35) [2006-10-30 16:20] [+]

Like the abstract patterns but the the top third of the picture is lifeless and therefore I suggest a hard crop to lose the dead space.
Barry

LenScapp Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor [C: 184 W: 60 N: 58] (35) [2006-10-30 16:19] [+]

Hi Ian
I think a little gardening would have helped here. The grasses? at back are a little distracting and could easily have been removed. There is a lot of noise in shadows so perhaps it would help to run it through Neat image
barry