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Lanbowen Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 388 W: 46 N: 401] (3172) [2013-07-24 20:31]

Hi Jovie,

Nice scene and great natural frame. Would love to hang out there right now!

David

Lanbowen Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 388 W: 46 N: 401] (3172) [2013-07-24 20:23]

Hi Muhammad,

Your manual work paid off. The picture makes me want to have naan right now. Good action and dof works well.

Cheers,

David

Lanbowen Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 388 W: 46 N: 401] (3172) [2013-07-24 20:22]

Hi Jack,

A very peaceful picture. Your horizon is straight and not in the middle and your reflection is wonderful.

Nice work,

David

Lanbowen Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 388 W: 46 N: 401] (3172) [2013-07-24 20:20]

Hi Roberto,

The effect of the colors works well. Good close-up. Just don't like the bottom frame, I would get rid off that.

Nice work,

David

Lanbowen Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 388 W: 46 N: 401] (3172) [2013-07-23 6:03]

Hi Ionela,

Your picture looks great with an amazing dof. But the lines (frame) on your picture are ruining it. They are so harsh and suddenly stop; maybe they would look better when they are softer or in a less obvious color or take out the inner rectangle. Just a thought.

Cheers,

David

Lanbowen Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 388 W: 46 N: 401] (3172) [2013-07-23 5:59]

Hi Steve,

The picture looks perfect with great sharpness and colors.
The frame to me is almost perfect; you get a 3D effect on the top and right corner but the left and bottom are giving me a 2D feeling.
Anyhow really great picture.

Cheers,

David

Lanbowen Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 388 W: 46 N: 401] (3172) [2013-07-23 5:56]

Hi Aamer,

I would love to try these. The picture gives an inviting look. The way you tilted the picture makes it better in terms of lines going through. Just the face is too yellow.

Cheers,

David

Lanbowen Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 388 W: 46 N: 401] (3172) [2013-07-23 0:09]

Hi Dave,

Great time to take the picture. It gives a beautiful empty feeling. Only the white rock on the left bothers me a little; there is a path going straight to it so can't keep my eyes from it. By just walking a bit to the right and taking the shot it would have been excluded.
Anyhow very nice photo.

Cheers,

David

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Fidy Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 112 W: 0 N: 79] (606)

Great

Lanbowen Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 388 W: 46 N: 401] (3172) [2013-07-23 0:05]

Very nice moment. The arm of the guy is in the perfect place leading right up to her!
Cheers,
David

Lanbowen Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 388 W: 46 N: 401] (3172) [2013-07-22 19:36]

Hi Pedro,

The white makes the trumpet stands out well. Nice sharpness.

Cheers,

David