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xvs1100 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 118 W: 51 N: 130] (960) [2007-09-18 22:57]

Hi Jonas,

Your jumping pictures seem to be a theme in your life. This one is speciffically interesting because of the background and I feel it reaches a point where the jumping idea is best set off with a classical background.

The picture of the landscape has merit on its own, but the person jumping adds a humorous and dynamic edge to it.

It is the way to go for you, as I see it. Taking an already meritous scene and combining it with some movement.

Where it concerns lighting and saturation, I have some ideas, but I'll try and include that in a workshop.

Have fun!


copadonat Gold Star Critiquer [C: 1144 W: 4 N: 2] (40) [2007-09-17 17:39]


te felicito bien trabajada la edición excelente ides original


izler Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 482 W: 69 N: 18] (72) [2007-09-16 12:43]

selam Jonas
really i see wonderful experimental-nature photo and nice comparison
i like composition, point of view, depth of field, lighting, colours and details
thanks for sharing

Fridl (51) [2007-09-16 6:51]

Zavus jonas
krasses absourdes pic, die idee mit der schmuckfarbe is echt net schlecht
gruß Frido

Toba_O Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor [C: 128 W: 10 N: 64] (536) [2007-09-16 5:48] - [workshop] [compare]

Hi Jonas sehr geiles Bild hast warscheinlich voll lange gebraucht umd as zu bearbeite
die zeit wars wert jedenfalls find ich das

GreenBaron Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 3009 W: 919 N: 12213] (52777) [2007-09-16 1:28]

Hi Jonas,
Although the PP-work need some improvement (the spoon in the soup on th FG need some adjustment) the whole idea is superb, a striking POV, excellent idea and excecution of the partly desaturation. The out of focus I forgive you with 1/15 shutter speed its hard to get it right. It's particular the idea and POV which makes this an interresting picture. Go one and practice; you will become a very good photographer!
Gut gemacht mein Freund!

:) Later...

jmcl Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 261 W: 4 N: 204] (656) [2007-09-15 15:11]

Hi Jonas.

An astonishingly well done study in perspective .. WOW!

Great colors as well .. the red against blue really fits well into the scheme of this image.

take care,


XOTAELE Gold Star Critiquer [C: 1303 W: 0 N: 11] (190) [2007-09-15 11:17]

Simpática imagen Jonás.
Espero estuviera buena...
Un saludo, JL.

anducina Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1319 W: 222 N: 923] (8395) [2007-09-15 10:47]

Excellent and original compo and framing. I like the b&w/color mixture.



gnada Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2538 W: 70 N: 4788] (22221) [2007-09-15 7:19]

Hi Jonas...
A great shot of this famous: "Eating Chinese Soup".
Very good action photo, well composed and exposed.

My complimments.