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yuckfouka Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 91 W: 38 N: 63] (458) [2010-11-30 10:46]

good concept for your model and nice contrast between the foreground and the background. i personally think that the lens flare on the top right doesnt help because there's no light source on the wall and it is evident that the light is coming directly towards the model, you can see it clearly on the shadows.

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jr

yuckfouka Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 91 W: 38 N: 63] (458) [2010-11-30 10:43]

good placement of the subject however, the lens flare filter didnt work well here as it just distracts the viewer on the negative space, also, unfinished black brushing is also evident since you can still see noise on the other black areas.

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yuckfouka Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 91 W: 38 N: 63] (458) [2010-11-30 10:38]

great dreamy waters! the polarizer really helped in taking this photo.

nice scenery as well

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jr

yuckfouka Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 91 W: 38 N: 63] (458) [2010-07-25 7:27]

nice warm tones. good composition. very candid and natural. reflects an everyday life moment. i like the light entering from the hole on the roof.

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jr

yuckfouka Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 91 W: 38 N: 63] (458) [2010-07-25 7:25]

good photo. warm tones. good light rays. reminds me of rarindra prakarsa, one of my idols in photography. it seems you adapted his technique since you are from the same country

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jr

yuckfouka Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 91 W: 38 N: 63] (458) [2010-07-25 7:23]

good composition. nicely distributed lighting from the side. strong subject. personally i dont like the very centered signature.

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jr

yuckfouka Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 91 W: 38 N: 63] (458) [2010-07-25 4:31]

hi lukasz! nice silhouette. this type is one of a kind. a silhouette with soft cottony water. the use of the ND filter works well here. i love the gradient colors on the sky and the placement of the trees on the frame is just perfect. great composition. good job!

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jr

yuckfouka Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 91 W: 38 N: 63] (458) [2010-07-24 22:45] [+]

this is one of my dream captures but i dont have a chance to get them since its very rare to rain in the middle east. Good shot. Keep it up!

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jr

yuckfouka Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 91 W: 38 N: 63] (458) [2010-07-23 20:23]

hi clecio! nice silhouette on a warm sun. i like the smooth light rays from the sun. on my personal opinion, the part of the boat on the right side is a bit distracting. the problem is, when you crop it, the sun will be too off centered.

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jr

yuckfouka Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 91 W: 38 N: 63] (458) [2010-07-23 19:55]

hi behrang. nice studio portrait. good posing from your model and nice side lighting. i like the gray backdrop. you maintained the sharpness on the eyes. good portrait shot.

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jr