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stefanmalin Silver Note Writer [C: 6 W: 2 N: 25] (253) [2009-01-12 3:55]

Hi Luc,
You have captured very well the moment.
Still your shadow is projected over the subject and that is something that you should be aware of and avoid it in the future.
Take care. Stefan

stefanmalin Silver Note Writer [C: 6 W: 2 N: 25] (253) [2008-12-16 1:24] [+]

Hi Robert,
This is very inspired composition. Certainly it is a heart shadow of the wedding ring. Also nice idea to put it in the Bible book.
Well done!
TFS, Stefan

stefanmalin Silver Note Writer [C: 6 W: 2 N: 25] (253) [2008-12-15 7:43]

Hey Michel,
The picture is lovely. Everything have been said before me. Personally I'm speachless.
Very well done!
TFS, Stefan

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stefanmalin Silver Note Writer [C: 6 W: 2 N: 25] (253) [2008-12-15 7:41]

Hello Apu,
This is a nice picture. Good sense of perspective and good light you've captured. I know how difficult is to work with low light so in my opinion you've done a good job here.
TFS, Stefan

stefanmalin Silver Note Writer [C: 6 W: 2 N: 25] (253) [2008-12-15 7:15] [+]

Hi Deepak,
Welcome to TLS. Hope you'll enjoy this journey in photography world and find useful people's comments.
This picture is quite good in light and colours. As composition, I think it can be improved by rule of thirds. Also, the horizont line is not straight and this can be improved as well. I will leave you a sample in workshop. Good Light! Stefan

stefanmalin Silver Note Writer [C: 6 W: 2 N: 25] (253) [2008-12-09 5:32]

Hi Rochelle,
This one I like more as you succeeded to capture the fine contour in contrast of the cheek and for the nice view point you choose.
Regards, Stefan

stefanmalin Silver Note Writer [C: 6 W: 2 N: 25] (253) [2008-12-08 5:49] [+]

Hi Dustein,
You captured a nice portrait, with very expressive eyes and sensual lips, so clear and sharp.
I wonder what lens you used to get f/1 stop.
Well done! TFS.
Stefan

stefanmalin Silver Note Writer [C: 6 W: 2 N: 25] (253) [2008-12-08 5:37]

Hi Rochelle,
Welcome to TLS. Nice begining with a self portrait.
First of all I would recommend you to save the EXIF information [exposure, shutter speed, ISO and staff like this] or to enter manually, in order to receive coherent feedback, which I think you look for.
Black and White give opportunity to contrast and contours, such eyes, lips, face contour and you captured them pretty good.
Good luck!
Regards,
Stefan

stefanmalin Silver Note Writer [C: 6 W: 2 N: 25] (253) [2008-12-05 6:46]

Salut Costi,
Da, cunosc locul si este o reprezentare fidela a ceea ce a fost candva una din portile Salonicului. Ideea ar fi fost mai interesanta sa alegi un unghi mai dinamic. Asa lucrarea are sensul unei perspective in trei dimensiuni prin incadrare in interiorul arcului si suprapunere cu blocul din spate. Personal imi pare cam statica.
Altfel este un inceput bun. Succes! Stefan

stefanmalin Silver Note Writer [C: 6 W: 2 N: 25] (253) [2008-12-04 11:44]

Hi Ewa,
This is a nice picture. B&W pictures emphasize the contours and contrasts. In the portrait of Laura, the eyes are the most expressive, then the chin contour, then lips. Very well done!
TFS. Stefan