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shayadave Silver Star Critiquer [C: 23 W: 7 N: 29] (305) [2006-04-16 13:19]

I like how you cut off each of the cars from one end you have the front of a car and another end you have the rear which is cool.

I certainly don't miss driving in the snow, but I do miss being there "In it" and seeing it.

dave

shayadave Silver Star Critiquer [C: 23 W: 7 N: 29] (305) [2006-01-11 9:34]

Great contrast and texture. You did great. Make sure you frame it and put it on your wall at home. :)

shayadave Silver Star Critiquer [C: 23 W: 7 N: 29] (305) [2006-01-11 9:32]

On the contrary, I think that your photo greatly compares to reddevils' picture. It's a different mood though and think that it's a great statement of growth with the child and the tree's together. Keep up the good shot's.

shayadave Silver Star Critiquer [C: 23 W: 7 N: 29] (305) [2006-01-11 9:29]

One thing that I might have done differently would have been to get down low in front of the boat and have it off center either to the left or right of the picture. Take plenty of shot's from different angle's. I like this shot though and think that you made a great feeling out of this picture.

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Great

shayadave Silver Star Critiquer [C: 23 W: 7 N: 29] (305) [2005-12-29 20:28]

Color's are excellent and are very warm feeling. I feel a sense of tension in this photo and it looks as if the chain is about to break apart. Great shot.

shayadave Silver Star Critiquer [C: 23 W: 7 N: 29] (305) [2005-12-29 20:24] [+]

Your city looks beautifull.

shayadave Silver Star Critiquer [C: 23 W: 7 N: 29] (305) [2005-12-21 4:48]

I don't know, for some reason this picture remind's me of Iraq, there's the city of Babylion and this picture just remind's me of it, that's all. Nothing major to say except that I'm not too keen on the border, but that's your own view on this picture and I don't want to take you away from your own creation. Happy Holidays. David

shayadave Silver Star Critiquer [C: 23 W: 7 N: 29] (305) [2005-12-21 4:45]

That's just a huge Croissant. I would darken this picture since it's really bright. and play around with the tone's and color's. Other than that this picture does have some potential. keep it up. David

shayadave Silver Star Critiquer [C: 23 W: 7 N: 29] (305) [2005-12-20 23:26]

Yes, the clouds are a must in this picture I think that you did great on choosing this one. Great eye and keep it up. David

shayadave Silver Star Critiquer [C: 23 W: 7 N: 29] (305) [2005-12-20 23:22] [2]

It's a wonderfull picture. I would have to say that I would have lightened it up a little bit, not too much though. That's it. I still love this picture. David. Don't change anything because I say so. LOL. Happy Holidays.