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mr_pedro Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 406 W: 200 N: 372] (4662) [2018-11-12 15:01]

Hi,

I like the background for this portrait.
Maybe it would have been nice to have the shade on the background be more clearly visible.

-Pedro

mr_pedro Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 406 W: 200 N: 372] (4662) [2018-11-12 14:42]

Hi,

I like the colours and dreamy feeling of the gleam.
Maybe you could have moved a bit closer to one of these people to put them more visible in the foreground.

-Pedro

mr_pedro Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 406 W: 200 N: 372] (4662) [2018-11-12 14:32]

Hi,

I like the lines and the shiny surface.
I don't like how the bumper is falling off and how the angle is just barely off-center.

-Pedro

mr_pedro Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 406 W: 200 N: 372] (4662) [2018-11-12 14:27]

Hi,

When shooting with a relatively wide angle like this, a big part of the image is in the foreground. You would do well to look for some interesting object to fill that part of the frame. That way you create more depth and it also makes for a more interesting shot.

-Pedro

mr_pedro Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 406 W: 200 N: 372] (4662) [2018-11-12 14:23] [+]

Hi,

The composition looks very tight, at least at the front of the bike it feels like it needs a bit more space.

Looking at the background, maybe I would have tried a shot where the man would be completely in front of the wall, making it look like he is in camouflage. Perhaps making it black and white would then enhance that effect.

-Pedro

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mesquens1 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2629 W: 147 N: 2136] (40753)

Good

mr_pedro Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 406 W: 200 N: 372] (4662) [2009-08-29 0:42] [+]

Hi,
Nobody actually reacts to your note, which surprises me a bit. You say that it is an HDR experiment, but the image is not really appropriate to show the HDR potential.
First of all let me show you some experiments I have done: HDR1, HDR2.

So you should try and take a subject with very dark parts and very bright parts, HDR will then enable you to show both in the image.

Also what software are you using and how did you make the HDR?

Pedro

mr_pedro Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 406 W: 200 N: 372] (4662) [2009-08-29 0:27]

A magnificent view. The magnitude is captured very nicely with the town on the foreground. A well composed shot.

TFS,
Pedro

mr_pedro Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 406 W: 200 N: 372] (4662) [2009-08-28 12:09]

Hi,
Ziet er goed uit, mooi beeld. De flitser heb je niet nodig als de zon zo schijnt.

Pedro

mr_pedro Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 406 W: 200 N: 372] (4662) [2009-08-28 12:05]

Hi, I like the idea, the B&W works good also. The contrast and detail in the hat is great. I don't like to much the way the background is totally black and also her skin doesn't look very nice with the conversion.

TFS,
Pedro

mr_pedro Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 406 W: 200 N: 372] (4662) [2009-08-28 12:01]

Ola Ana,

Gosto da composição, uma imagem que podia ir assim para um guia turístico. A única coisa que distrai são as partes onde cai o sol. Aí tem luz a mais e teria sido melhor dar um pouco menos de luz.

Abraço,
Pedro