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atomas59 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 556 W: 746 N: 637] (3826) [2015-06-07 14:32]

This were manual mode becomes handy. You dis a Nice job exposure Wise on This one. Great shot.

atomas59 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 556 W: 746 N: 637] (3826) [2014-08-10 16:59]

Well I think you're the only one so far, that understand the parameter of this theme....well done.

atomas59 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 556 W: 746 N: 637] (3826) [2014-07-21 15:03]

Well captured...NO.
The exposure is all wrong. Total absence of black and dark tone in your shot. Overall composition is O.K. At what Asa did you shot this....1/1600 and it still look wash out? Your asa was probably to high. Dark tone, brings richness and impact to most photos. Remember that the face of the animal, is in the shadow.....so should appear darker (shades and tones) in this shot.

Mosty improved in "workshop", tho I believe, that good exposure at start, diminish..optimisation....later on, in post process.

atomas59 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 556 W: 746 N: 637] (3826) [2014-07-14 23:28]

Well I can dig this, beautifull image, reflecting this weekly theme. Very applicated, it's showing thru the image. Bravo.

atomas59 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 556 W: 746 N: 637] (3826) [2014-07-05 15:57]

Using a smaller aperture...like f/8...you can spare some shutter speed...like 1/400 of sec....would give the bird more definition... which the bird seems to miss a little...and could be improved.)) Nice crop tho.

atomas59 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 556 W: 746 N: 637] (3826) [2014-03-28 19:15]

Very nice work, I specially like the subdued shadow, in the face area. Great capture of "emotion" on the model face. Now on minor détails...sweater or garment, like showing of the bra, and texture of the sweater could be improved. Contrast could also be a little higher. Black is not at it max. Aside this minor flaws....a great picture.

atomas59 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 556 W: 746 N: 637] (3826) [2014-03-05 9:48]

Love this shot...very well composed, with a very special feel, the fuzziness add to the mysterious mood, with those bend lines. Overall shot is well balance, and appealing to the eye, and mind..))

atomas59 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 556 W: 746 N: 637] (3826) [2013-06-26 5:43]

This an exeptionnal shot. Exposure right, with very plaasant high contrast. I specially like the dark tones, that draw some kind of imaginairy line. From the underbelly of the pigeon on the left, then the second one, the the leg, and totally dark shoe..to the other one. Lot of mouvement in that shot, real dynamic...nice work.

atomas59 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 556 W: 746 N: 637] (3826) [2013-06-17 18:12]

A very pretty shot, tho, overexposed...should have exposed for highlights...would have given, better contrast and tones. Here, there is a few prédominants "burn spot". Aside from that...well, a very exciting scene...))Keep up the image making..))

atomas59 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 556 W: 746 N: 637] (3826) [2013-06-17 2:33]

This is very nice, good lines and shapes, very interesting visually. Great range of tones...nice deep blacks, good highlight, and all those shades of grey....well exposed..good handling of the shiny surface, such as the piece of glass..

Well done, regards,