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gaspar (39) [2008-06-06 9:41]

Magnífica toma. Se puede oir el silencio de las piedras.

Spain
Title: Sara
Sara (3)
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Dingo Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2522 W: 368 N: 2626] (11964) [2008-05-01 7:52]

Nice girl and a good pose, Miguel. Use of ambient light (near a window, it seems) worked out well, but I think there may be a slight problem with the white balance - her face looks really pale...
I find the "bulb" on her dress a bit distracting, it could be easily removed with the clone stamp tool.
Anyway, TFS.
A little note would be appreciated, so we could appreciate the set-up for the shot.

rewshearer Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 5496 W: 444 N: 4351] (24649) [2008-04-12 12:06]

Excellent action capture, I love it!

ls_photography Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor [C: 1096 W: 352 N: 536] (4034) [2008-04-08 15:23]

Awesome shot placing the subject off-center, but you didn't leave a note to describe anything about the picture.
It is helpful to explain what kind of mood you were going for, or where you took the shot..

Kilted-Arab Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor [C: 1192 W: 77 N: 1849] (8186) [2008-04-05 6:27]

Hi Miguel - I see you have posted 37 snaps and made zero critiques.

In addition there is no photographer's note.

Have you read the site guidelines regarding notes and critiques?

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Title: La cruz
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SofiG Silver Star Critiquer [C: 13 W: 0 N: 0] (230) [2008-02-14 15:17]

:-) :-) :-)

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Title: La cruz
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tweetkater (28) [2008-02-14 12:42]

This is a very moving photo for me. When I look at it I feel surrounded or engulfed by the power. Lovely.....Kate

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ls_photography Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor [C: 1096 W: 352 N: 536] (4034) [2007-09-29 8:48]

I think in this case, centering does not matter- the picture is just dramatic and intense. Maybe a bit oversharpened on the face, but thats ok.
TFS

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rewshearer Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 5496 W: 444 N: 4351] (24649) [2007-09-21 16:40]

Lovely portrait!
Rew

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Title: A chimney
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rewshearer Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 5496 W: 444 N: 4351] (24649) [2007-05-03 4:22]

Hi Miguel
Beautiful shot - amazing!

I wish there was a note though!

Rew