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ObySamKenoby (18) [2007-04-18 15:27]

Excellent. Very beautyful composition, incredible sharpness and exceptional timing. This is a shot to remember.


ObySamKenoby (18) [2007-04-15 15:29]

Beautiful photo, the diagonal composition united to the reflexes is marvellous. The humans occupying the left quadrant are in a perfect position, I can nearly hear they speaking.

Great shot!

ObySamKenoby (18) [2007-04-15 9:08]

Very good composition, details and colors, demonstration that sometimes following the rules is not so bad... I don't like the frame, but it's my taste.

Good shot!


ObySamKenoby (18) [2007-04-14 15:09] [+]

This photo is the perfect sum of your story. It is also well composed (not easy, considering the subjects) with good colors and detail. They were playing, right?

Wish you a good time

ObySamKenoby (18) [2007-04-14 15:05] [+]

And that's a very good photo, with good composition and DOF. Focus on third girl gave you a perfect balance of out of focus, making nearly all the performers well defined. Sadly the sky is burnt, what camera did you use?


Title: Storks
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ObySamKenoby (18) [2007-04-14 12:07]

The photo would be perfect, hadn't the wing of the upper bird cut in half. Anyway, bautiful moment and great definition, definitely a shot to learn from.


PS: Are these in a controlled environment?

ObySamKenoby (18) [2007-04-14 8:22]

It's a great example of portrait + PP.
Well done.