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KBE Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 571 W: 132 N: 805] (3839) [2013-04-14 2:10]

Hi Roger
I like this one, in terms of light and highlighting her long boot.
Nice use of light and selection of B&W. I'd have loved to see her hand in relaxing position and her other arm in the view, my opinion only :)

TFS
Malik

KBE Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 571 W: 132 N: 805] (3839) [2011-05-31 4:16]

Fantastic capture Abdul bhai.
Great shallow DOF with excellent sharpness.
Really like her contact with the camera.

Beautiful one!

TFS
Cheers
JZM

KBE Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 571 W: 132 N: 805] (3839) [2011-03-18 5:51]

Hello Naseer

Yes i like the view, colors, snow covered hills and the inclusion of f/g rocks.
The only point IMO is, the lake is lilted to the right, steady water cant be tilted otherwise u will witness water flow. I do not find the water flow to the right where its tilted :)

TFS
Cheers
JZM

KBE Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 571 W: 132 N: 805] (3839) [2011-03-13 23:17] [+]

Hi Hudda

Nice to see u back in action :)
I see u r interest in Eye photos. A good choice, i myself like to see the soul through the gateway :)

Nice capture n very good PP work. Mujtab's WS is good too but can be done better.

Few links for ur consideration if u like to try out some PP (Heavy Post-production)

1. http://emerald-depths.deviantart.com/art/Unleashed-191146103?q=gallery%3Aemerald-depths%2F7016069&qo=16

2. http://emerald-depths.deviantart.com/art/Kiss-From-a-Rose-198896892?q=gallery%3Aemerald-depths%2F7016069&qo=4

3. http://emerald-depths.deviantart.com/art/Tajii-193876310?q=gallery%3Aemerald-depths%2F7016069&qo=11

4. http://emerald-depths.deviantart.com/art/Glamour-153902428?q=gallery%3Aemerald-depths%2F7016069&qo=99

Album: http://emerald-depths.deviantart.com/gallery/7016073

TFS
Cheers
JZM

KBE Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 571 W: 132 N: 805] (3839) [2011-03-13 22:53]

Hi Jens
Nice to see u back after a break, Welcome back :)

Excellent use of prospective control lens, the PP work is very neat.
I dont know how it was taken by "Danish Micro Brewery" IMHO the approach of highlight in the background of product should be done very thoughtfully, it shouldn't pinch the viewers eye and at the same time it should highlight the Brand, making it stand out :)

Good job :)

TFS
Cheers
JZM

KBE Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 571 W: 132 N: 805] (3839) [2011-03-04 4:18]

Hi Lecia
To be honest, composition light n eye contact is spot on. But in my opinion this look (by ur pp work) seems to be very artificial, redish color on her jawline is a mess, face seems to be very un-natural too flat (plastic look). A slight imperfection of masking can be noticed on her shoulder (there is no depth between her n the back drop), toning down the b/g, shoulder and chest is a good idea but imperfect.

some examples of GOOD pp work for ur consideration.

http://www.flickr.com/photos/[email protected]0/5088711054/
http://www.flickr.com/photos/[email protected]/5086566278/
http://www.flickr.com/photos/[email protected]/5165552491/

TFS
Cheers
Jz

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KBE Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 571 W: 132 N: 805] (3839) [2011-01-07 3:54]

Hello Andrey
I like the soft B&W tones, its a well framed composition with excellent DOF sharpness and contrast.

But i've so many questions, where this guy's lookin at? why he's lookin there? is it posed or natural one? what is he doin with these waste-belts? why did u take this one? what was the situation? how did u process it? which camera and lens u've used what was the F number and bla bla... :)

TFS ;)
Cheers
JZM

KBE Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 571 W: 132 N: 805] (3839) [2011-01-04 2:41]

Salam Mushtaq bhai

Nice to see some stuff coming from ur indoors ;)
I like the use of light, nice low key portrait.
Good use of light and shade.

Keep experimenting with different angles and positions u'll enjoy it alot :)

TFS
Cheers
JZM

KBE Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 571 W: 132 N: 805] (3839) [2011-01-04 2:39]

WoW what a nice take.

The moment is priceless n unlike 1st critique, CLOSED-EYE really works at its best or in other words his closed-lips smile n closed eyes made this one superb.

Loving the tones and grains thats beautiful. I only grip the NARROW DOF, if it was taken at f/4 (probably) it would have given great DOF to keep the other eye in focus to present the true SHEER JOY

Jz

KBE Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 571 W: 132 N: 805] (3839) [2010-12-21 21:38]

Salam Abid

A good off camera flash, sharpness is at its best no doubt. The B&W adds to the mood.

I think the proper implementation of light direction (45 degrees) would have given it a better look.

TFS
Regards,
JZM