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Ilir Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 518 W: 67 N: 53] (5121) [2008-07-20 16:48] [+]

I was thinking of you one summer night near a seaside. Just while listening toL http://youtube.com/watch?v=JfHLrjYtOXs

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Title: me
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Ilir Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 518 W: 67 N: 53] (5121) [2008-07-20 16:40]

I have a problem with the eye focusing on your arm, which appears as a lifeless limb. Since you pp the shots, consider adding some more color, shadow or a tattoo.

Very clever touch with you growing (comming) out of stone. Adds a nice philosophical, greek-classic touch.

Be as it may, there is no doubt that: http://youtube.com/watch?v=wlDmslyGmGI

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Ilir Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 518 W: 67 N: 53] (5121) [2008-07-20 16:34]

Strange. The scenery is so calm, but the colors give a sense of apocalyptic feel.

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Title: eyes
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sundew (3759)

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Ilir Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 518 W: 67 N: 53] (5121) [2008-07-20 16:33]

Silence is flowery, when eyes radiate happines. Love those silver-hairs on the left.

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Ilir Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 518 W: 67 N: 53] (5121) [2007-07-16 18:04] [+]

Hey girl, thanx for your support and compliments. They were always appreciated. Keep up looking around you and stay true to yourselves.

Bye

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Ilir Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 518 W: 67 N: 53] (5121) [2007-07-16 17:58]

Ubavo devojce! Mora da je sa Galicke svadbe koja se sad treba odrzati tamo.

Ja napustam ovaj sajt. Postao je ... bljak.

Dodji na flickr.

Ciao

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Ilir Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 518 W: 67 N: 53] (5121) [2007-07-16 17:57]

Was ... Not Was

this pappa is a rolling stone.

Rolling to the other place.

See ya there.

Bye

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Ilir Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 518 W: 67 N: 53] (5121) [2007-07-16 17:56]

Thanx for sharing your approach to phot and helping me to improve my skills. It was fun while it lasted. Stay creative, keep the humor.

Bye

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Title: Mamae
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Ilir Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 518 W: 67 N: 53] (5121) [2007-07-13 9:23]

An angel! Wonderful!

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Ilir Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 518 W: 67 N: 53] (5121) [2007-07-13 9:17] [+]

All is fine, but one element - the format. A wider, more panoramic capture would have been more efficient, bringing context to the scene, more depth and more story. Adding a black frame does not help much, as it additionaly constrains the mood.

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