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Derona Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 266 W: 154 N: 855] (5631) [2011-03-24 6:09] [+]

Hi Ron

Nice to see something different, love the colours and light in this. Thanks for the note explaining the technique.
Will need to try.
TFS

Derek

Derona Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 266 W: 154 N: 855] (5631) [2011-03-21 10:13] [+]

Hi Bryan

Good action shot from the weekend rally, like this better than the other, no need for the PP work.
TFS

Regards Derek

Derona Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 266 W: 154 N: 855] (5631) [2011-03-21 9:53]

Hi Linda

Nice shot of this old timer, I would love to go sailing in one of these.
The modern ship helps show the scale the Elissa, wonder how many modern ships will be around in 120 years, I remember when the QE2 was launched and that has now been scrapped due to old age!!!
Like your PP work really makes it stand out.
TFS

Regards Derek

Derona Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 266 W: 154 N: 855] (5631) [2011-03-07 14:53] [+]

Hi John

Took a couple of shots of this same ship when I was in Corfu erlier in the year. This shot brings back great memories of our time in Corfu, looks like you were near Agni bay when you took this, a few nice restaurants there.
Back to this shot, have never seen Albania so clearly than in this shot but I think a different crop may have improved the shot.
The bushes in the foreground seem to split the composition of the shot and I think the shot would be better without these, maybe just cropping below the clipper.

Best Regards
Derek

Derona Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 266 W: 154 N: 855] (5631) [2010-12-05 4:00]

Hi Francis

Like thgis shot, it is busy with colours and lines but your DOF concentrates the focus on the main boat.
Not too keen on the frame, I find it too distracting.
TFS

Regards Derek

Derona Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 266 W: 154 N: 855] (5631) [2010-12-05 3:29] [+]

Hi Bryan

Really like this shot.
Well composed shot through the gates.
Slight nit pick is that you have cropped the arch at the top, might have been better to crop even more from the top.
Still a good shot.
TFS

Derek

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RSK Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1089 W: 589 N: 1943] (14753)

Great

Derona Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 266 W: 154 N: 855] (5631) [2010-12-05 3:20] [+]

Hi Ron

Well noticed, the geometric lines and shadows make a great shot.
Hope you don't mind but I have added a workshop, nothing wrong with this shot, just passing time at an airport.
TFS

Regards Derek

Derona Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 266 W: 154 N: 855] (5631) [2010-11-22 7:50]

Hi Vlad

Really nice shot, like the simplicity of the composition and the contrast of the colours.
TFS

Regards Derek

Derona Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 266 W: 154 N: 855] (5631) [2010-11-15 8:58] [+]

Hi Trudy

Well noticed and taken.
I have added a workshop, hope you don't mind, just increased contrast and converted to B&W.
TFS

Regards Derek

Derona Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 266 W: 154 N: 855] (5631) [2010-11-15 8:31]

Hi Bev

Nice angle for this shot of the pier.
As you say the reflection in the wet sand add interest to this shot, I may have cropped that small band of sand from the bottom.
TFS

Regards Derek