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(271) [2020-07-21 10:40] Hi Michel
original I like the colors and the composition.
ciao deffra
(271) [2020-07-21 10:30] Hi Jack,
a sympathetic portrait good portrait and light.
Ciao Deffra
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(14283) [2020-07-20 17:07] Hi Jack !!
Superb realisation with photomatix. Not too much, just perfect !!
The colors and details are amazing !!
Bravo very beautiful !!
Claude
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(9654) [2020-07-19 22:05] Hi Musa,
a great low PoV which is ideal for photographing children, I also like the catch-lights in her eyes and the slight blur of her hand
cheers
Jack
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(9654) [2020-07-19 22:02] Hi Michael,
I like the composition here with your friend's head following the rule of thirds and him looking into the distance and not at the camera, perhaps a shallower DoF would have blurred out the background figure
Well done
Jack
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(5943) [2020-07-18 14:13] Michael
It's a beautiful tribute to your best friend, b&w, the moment.
I like the dignity and respect that emanates from this portrait.
I'm touched. I think of my father.
Well done Mrmike.
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(14) [2020-07-18 7:42] This is a lovely casual portrait. Lovely greyscale. Nice composition and DOF. Perhaps there could be even a little bit more DOF to have your friend stand out even a bit more. But that is only nitpicking. I say very well done. And how lovely to have such a lovely photo of your friend. I am sorry for you loss.
Hi Janek
Beautifull view TFS
deffra